2011高考英語(yǔ)作文練習：記敘文

　　假如你是武漢大學(xué)附中高三（1）的李華，今年即將高中畢業(yè)。請根據以下要點(diǎn)給某英文報寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀銓Ω呷�生活的看法�?br />
　�。�1）對獲得的幫助表示感謝；

　�。�2）消除與 同學(xué)之間的誤會(huì )；

　�。�3）努力學(xué)習，實(shí)現人生夢(mèng)想；

　�。�4）對學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹的建議。

　　注意：

　�。�1）可適當加入細節，以使行文連貫；

　�。�2）詞數：100左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計入總詞數） 。

　　High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior 3 student, it won't take lon g before I graduate._____________________________________________________________________

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　　【猜題理由】本篇書(shū)面表達能比較真實(shí)地反映學(xué)生的生活實(shí)際，話(huà)題內容關(guān)注學(xué)生的社交生活和樹(shù)立健康的人生觀(guān)，具有考查的現實(shí)意義和指導意義；在語(yǔ)言表達上，能夠讓學(xué)生充分運用所學(xué)知識，毫無(wú)詞匯障礙地表達自己的思想；此外，在語(yǔ)言表達的設置上也有一定的伸展性，能有效地激發(fā)學(xué)生個(gè) 性觀(guān)點(diǎn)的創(chuàng )建。

　　【構思點(diǎn)撥】本篇書(shū)面表達是常見(jiàn) 的提綱類(lèi)型的寫(xiě)作，要點(diǎn)明確清楚，便于學(xué)生組織文章，理清脈絡(luò )。行文時(shí)要注意處理好語(yǔ)言表達的控制性和伸展性之間的關(guān)系。

　　【參考范文】

　　High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior three student, it won't take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.

　　Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me  all the way, teachers, pare nts and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly,  it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges  to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effo rt to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains."

　　Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.